Plot Review:

The plot is great. Really like the development, shows a real pro con-man at work.

Character Development:

The characters are concisely defined and I get a real feel for who they are.

Setting:

The mall area is fine but maybe add a few more unique aspects to make it seem more real.

Grammar, punctuation, etc.:

I didn't see any issues with the technical portions of the story.

Dialogue:

Could use more differences between the way each character talks. They all sound similar. Also, could use more confrontation in their speaking.

Other comments:

Good story, well developed. Add more intensity on your next draft.