Classic western standoff!

Review written by: [get_author]

Published on: Saturday, April 9, 2022 @ 07:56:41 am

Plot Review:

Started interesting, then moved around a lot, which I really liked.

Character Development:

The lead is great. Other characters seem a bit generic.


The setting was solid.

Grammar, punctuation, etc.:


Dialogue was good but could use some twang or more words from that time period.

Other comments:

A few tweaks and this one is submittable to a major site for publishing.

Overall view of story:

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