Solid introduction, looking forward to updates!

Review written by: [get_author]

Published on: Friday, July 9, 2021 @ 04:10:20 pm

Plot Review:

Plot was a bit slow in the middle but not so much that it became uninteresting.

Character Development:

Thought Marty McFly was very interesting but would have liked a bit more character arc.


Understood the setting but could have used a bit more detail to make it more real.

Grammar, punctuation, etc.:

All fundamentals seemed sound. Think there was one small misspelling in 2nd paragraph.


Loved the inflections!

Other comments:

Can't believe this is your first posting. You must have been working on it for some time.

Overall view of story:

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